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Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: I cant figure out my writing style?” plus 5 more

Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: I cant figure out my writing style?” plus 5 more


Question: I cant figure out my writing style?

Posted: 25 Jul 2016 04:14 PM PDT

I am a writer, I would not consider myself a poet but I write poetry and I am trying to transition to writing rap. When I write poetry it just comes out but I feel with rap it is different. I have an idea already of how i write (and i will post an example below) but I would like input on my writing style (not asking to critique my work but if you need to go ahead). If you need a bigger sample size click on this [ http://www.powerpoetry.org/ ] navigate to the bottom write to the search button and search [ Patrick Unachukwu ] and my all those poems are mine.

Example I promised:
The end. The end of my world and it tore me up because I saw my place in the universe freeze in a nightmare yet the rest of existence moved on in bliss and tranquility. I was exposed to the tempest hidden inside the harmony passing me. Maybe that's what it means to grow up. Maybe I am clinically insane. I like chaos. But it is a parasite. It is the drug that allows me to feel like more than what I am, but it is also the drug that descends me when I soar to high. It grants me my ascension into heaven then drags me down before the gates open. It is a paradox. It lets me live but will not let me have a life. Now there are two.

Question: Just a quick poem I've been passing out. What's you think?

Posted: 25 Jul 2016 10:40 AM PDT

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