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Question: Could someone please edit my poem?
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Question: Could someone please edit my poem?

Posted: 30 Jan 2016 02:43 PM PST

Yes I will try..

I believe that when strength gives way to fear,
It's darkness consumes all.
A tumor, growing, spreading despair.
Desperation. Pain. Yearning not to fall.

Abandon all hope, the end is coming near,
For you have lost ideas of what you hold dear,
I believe that when all seems lost,
A kind heart will ease the cost.

Kind hands reach out,
to gather up a broken soul.
To remove the sands of doubt,
and save it from it's darkest toll.

Question: How to describe a broken Jingle bell?

Posted: 30 Jan 2016 10:18 AM PST

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Which living creatures (other than man) has the poet mentioned in his poem?<br/>2. That does the poet mean when he says that the grasshopper wears 'the short night weary'?<br/>3. 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