Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: Describe brown eyes?” plus 5 more |
- Question: Describe brown eyes?
- Question: What is the meaning of this phrase from Robert Browning's poem "The Pied Piper of Hamlin: "Rats! They fought the dogs and killed the cats!"?
- Question: Can somebody help me with this?
- Question: Something new - is it crap?
- Question: This poem is unique.?
- Question: Do you like my poem or writing sample?
| Question: Describe brown eyes? Posted: 04 Sep 2015 04:50 PM PDT Report AbuseAdditional DetailsIf you believe your intellectual property has been infringed and would like to file a complaint, please see our Copyright/IP Policy Report Abuse Cancel Report AbuseAdditional DetailsIf you believe your intellectual property has been infringed and would like to file a complaint, please see our Copyright/IP Policy Report Abuse Cancel Report AbuseAdditional DetailsIf you believe your intellectual property has been infringed and would like to file a complaint, please see our Copyright/IP Policy Report Abuse Cancel  |
| Posted: 04 Sep 2015 02:54 PM PDT That's not the whole poem. That's just a stanza from the poem. This line and this stanza mean exactly what they say. If you read the whole poem from the beginning, you'll see that this stanza gives you more information about an infestation of rats that was causing trouble for the town of Hamelin, in Germany. What part of this stanza do you not understand? It seems to me to be written in extremely simple and clear language. It's funny because of the repeated rhyming words and the amazing feats of theft and destruction these rats seem to capable of. |
| Question: Can somebody help me with this? Posted: 04 Sep 2015 01:57 PM PDT You don't need a critical thinking teacher. O Lord. Please understand the difference between critique & critical. We need critique for progress to Beverly Hills. |
| Question: Something new - is it crap? Posted: 04 Sep 2015 12:10 PM PDT Reminiscing reasons Reminiscing rhyme Reminiscing reality and Thoughts in the sublime. Reminiscing pain Reminiscing hunger Thinking 'bout the sweetness |
| Question: This poem is unique.? Posted: 04 Sep 2015 11:08 AM PDT I thought this poem was unique and was curious as to how other's interpret this, it's called "Happiness" by Edith Wharton. Anyway, here it is "THIS perfect love can find no words to say. Then shall we hear beneath the brooding wing |
| Question: Do you like my poem or writing sample? Posted: 04 Sep 2015 09:51 AM PDT "Your heavenly glow burns within the light of my soul, heavenly beauty." An example: This line would still make the point stated as this, "Your heavenly glowburns within my soul" OR burns bright within my soul. You need not repeat heavenly preceding beauty, "Your beauty embraces me." Find other ways to express without repeating "beauty" Farther rather than further. Or work in "Beyond" "Lost to". drop it the second time, the point has been made. Lips to toes can be expressed more poertically even through allusion. "in beauty and wonder, I am lost in awe and wonder for you." you can drop this, and regarding infinity, "Stretch infinitely" Head to toe again in S 2, try some other way to express wholeness, over all of the person. "eternal, infinite beauty", can be reworked. No matter how proficient or prolific a writer / poet is, we are all a work in progress, you clain you're not a writer, this isn't a bad effort, but always think edit, remove filler words not needed, especially repeating, or fixating on a word / words, when your point can be made more succinctly. Take constructive critism, ignore bashing. Practice may never make perfect, but it can't hurt if you're a wanna be. |
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