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Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: What do you think about my short poem?” plus 3 more

Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: What do you think about my short poem?” plus 3 more


Question: What do you think about my short poem?

Posted: 24 Dec 2015 03:35 PM PST

I don't know what to call it yet and I'm kind of having mixed feelings about it. I'm a little less than an amateur.

Shattering the art,
Tranquilizing dart.
Numb to the joy,
Heart-broken boy.

Keeping it sweet,
Dance to the beat.
Aching bones,
Heart of stones.

Laugh 'til you die,
Until you cry.
Immense pain,
Red stain.

Vicious cycle,
Endless struggle.
Helpless case,
Hopeless race.

Question: Consejo para una carta navideña.?

Posted: 24 Dec 2015 09:10 AM PST

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