i made this in a couple minutes so it might not be that good can you tell me what you think of it after?

Since it started it is always cold out
there is never a warm and welcoming sun to shine in the morning
The once white snow
Is now stained with are countries blood
It seem as if all the animals have dissapered
And were replased by soilders
The birds once beutifull morning song
Have been replaced by gunshots and explosives
My once beutifull and once peacefull country that many people call home
Now is replaced by war and battlefeilds
my home has become a warzone

Sometimes when i look at your smile it's just too much
When i look at you at all it makes me melt from inside
A single hug is like a thousand years worth of waiting, and now you are here
Your hair is like looking at pure silk and your eyes are like looking into crystals.
Sunshine is like night time when i compare it to you
Your eyes reflect my waiting your smile is brighter than a star
and what i said you truly are...

Update : If you could add a link that would be awesome too but i can't find it :( thanks in advance

What kind of figurative language is this? "as my first mosh-pit branded brain begins to boil." I m thinking metaphor but I m not too sure.?