I made it to the second comma.

Whining at harsh criticism doesn't do anything. First, show - don't tell. Second, fix your grammar and spelling and word usage. Third, don't explain your figurative language - it's not only annoying, it's insulting to the readers. Fourth, don't try to explain the entire condition of the universe in a poem like this.

Poems without patterns of rythm, rhyme, and line length are known as what? Help,Cant figure it out!?

A. Modern verse
D. Free verse
C. ballads
D. Villanelles

Alive with data
Communication
Spanning a world
Every nation
Tapping screens
Playing games and apps
Brand new phone
Makes me better, perhaps

A race is on
To solve problems anew
A raging tech war
Bought and sold by the lucky few..

it good now but because you ask maybe something about ---and when we feel or see the last little light its already 8 minutes in the night---but it may not be technically correct but would get some to thinking about it

Hard work - cracking, smacking, banging.
Fun work - hitting, building, clanging.
Working and producing,
Tightening and loosing.
Work, then check.
We get it done in tech.