So here's my second attempt at voice acting. Probably not at a professional quality you're (probably) use to or even as close, but I'm here to learn. A little critique here or there can go a pretty long way. As can praising or belittling, though they have their consequences on the person you're critiquing.

Https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kIlPSRp7XAc

Let me know how I did and where I can improve, please ^^

He subdued Gaul for starters. He reformed the Roman calendar. His name Caesar is reflected in Kaiser, Czar. Future Roman emperors were referred to as Caesar.
That fact that even after +2000 years we still remember him shows that he was outstanding. Even the date of his assassination, the Ides of March, 44 BC is the most famous date in history.

In one part of my story the area is always black outside.. never daylight and not night when stars are showing just blackness.

When im setting the scene using
EXT. MONSELLS THEATER -
What should i put next? Night or Dark or Blackness? What might sound best?