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Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: Do you like this poem? What does it make you imagine? What would you add? ๐Ÿ˜Š?” plus 5 more

Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: Do you like this poem? What does it make you imagine? What would you add? 😊?” plus 5 more


Question: Do you like this poem? What does it make you imagine? What would you add? 😊?

Posted: 15 Aug 2015 03:05 PM PDT

This is REALLY good, I had writers block just one minute ago and THANK YOU, YOU HAVE INSPIRED ME AND GIVEN ME INSPIRATION TO CONTINUE TO WRITE!!! Dont worry, I will not use your poem, amd no, the idea I have will not copy your poem anyway. From your poem, my assumption is that the person who is telling this peom from their view, feels bad for this girl that seems to close off to people, because of the for te fear that she will be left heartbroken once more.(For fear shell be broken again') She seems quiet but inside she's struggling with her emotions and past, which I assume has something to do with the heartbreak (Shes quiet but she talks in her sleep, she sobs and wails of her past) And the person telling this, tries to help her but their effort isnt enough, and cant seem to make her whole again. (I tried to comfort her poor old soul,but I never could close up that hole.)

Source(s): Hpw I interpret things I guess?

Question: I like to mess with my mind, it never hurts. Comments.?

Posted: 15 Aug 2015 02:30 PM PDT

Does not do a lot for my mind, either...Still, we are of two minds..est vous une femme? et..fatale?

I search this write, as well one might
For what might not be rumbuctious
By avatar, `B obnoxious`.
You know, there is no, `better me`;
Each instant is as it can be -
Still, even `tween sister and brother
Or lovelorn.. no-one knows another.
We see but clips interpreted.
This is a write I`ve three times read
And think - no hurt? No harm expected?
Enough now - this is vivisected
For metaphors and corridors of rhyme the thoughts have wandered - in treachery?,
Along; with words as chaperones to bridge minds healed...I say, `Finis!`

L.D...

Question: Whats stronger in mridicine migrams 4 or 10 milligramswhich is , more potent?

Posted: 15 Aug 2015 12:47 PM PDT

I have not met Mr. Idicine. You might find him in the `Health` cat^-^gory.
I have no notion if his is a puny or a potent potion.

It`s in the `poetry category
Where all the noirs might glimpse or see
Through veils of verbiage, cant or error
A question (noir..of help, or - terror?)
So post it elsewhere, not the `Poetry ` forum
Permitting us to maintain - decorum..

.
L.D.

Question: Your thoughts on this poem?

Posted: 15 Aug 2015 10:54 AM PDT

Where do i begin, as i pick up my pen
again i write her a sappy love letter
in my heart, without me, i know she is better
off she switched the light from my life
she moved on and never thought twice
before she rolled the dice in this crap shoot
of a game we all must call life

My only regret was not being good enough
to finish on top but at least i know
i never left a girl high and dry yet
return to sender address unknown
so such person

Question: I was of sound mind when I wrote this, my letter box wasn't. Comments.?

Posted: 15 Aug 2015 09:05 AM PDT

....tomorrow`s Sunday, tell your singular letterbock......
.......it better learn days of the week, or .....Is this just ole double Poppy Cock? :D
.............as for difffcult rats and nails torn orf....it might not give that artifact quite a larf
..................whilst, we Be hooked on verbals ..sound minds? - not the plaice
........................but letters make pomeys, till Monday, palm your face
.............................coz a letterbock wrath - 0, avoid! Run! and - Shudder!
...................................so, remember the postage for [somethin` or other].

Wot squiffy weekend here..we`d a similar one with Buk awhile ago..all boundaries Kerrputtt.*looks mystified*,
........................,

L.D.

Question: Can you read my poem and tell me what you think?

Posted: 15 Aug 2015 08:36 AM PDT

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