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Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: Opinions and suggestions on my poem?” plus 5 more

Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: Opinions and suggestions on my poem?” plus 5 more


Question: Opinions and suggestions on my poem?

Posted: 21 Nov 2015 05:04 PM PST

It's a first draft. No hate.
Empty

Deep inside, all the emotions I hide.
When nothing seems fine;
I am losing a lot of time,
I am lost inside my mind.

I miss the way it used to be,
When nothing mattered but me and you.
Music, country roads, & future dreams.
I miss you; I wish you could see,
How much this is killing me.

Lost and forgotten;
Numb and broken,
Emptiness in my heart,
I feel the aches, the pains when we're apart.

Not happy, but not sad;
All these emotions and all I feel is empty.
That's what I feel without you by my side,
Empty...

But, hey I'm fine;
I am gonna be alright,
Stars can't shine without darkness, right?

Question: Is Wilfred Owen's poem "Arms and the Boy" classified as a European war poem?

Posted: 21 Nov 2015 03:15 PM PST

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