do they sound professional or amateur?

1. the basis of all cowardice is manufactured fear.

2. the greatest barrier to growth is peace. if u want change, u need war

Does anybody know any literary critics on the genre of love in poetry? everything seems to be on a specific poem and not the genre of love.?

Please help!! I would be grateful if you can point me in the direction of any books, quotes, websites, journels etc LITERARY CRITISM ON THE GENRE OF LOVE (poetry). Thankyou

Plot your character's hyperbole
setting the dialogue in conflict.
Described in detail by the narrator
As a smooth progression will predict.

Analyze the tone of events in the story
Simile and metaphor, meaningful connotation
Personify the sensory point of view
The event sequence seeks resolution.

start with her name then write

Name we have been friends for years
And we will carry on so
So on today your birthday
I wanted you to know

How much your friendship means to me
I hope that it will last
Then we will have such happy times
As we had in the past