Thank you for your time. The format is in mirrored refrain, thus the repetition ;)

Amongst life's trials and tribulations,
our journeys are unknown.
Love remains forevermore;
we never are alone.

And when the rain comes pouring down
and drenches to the core,
we never are alone;
Love remains forevermore.

Though heartache sings on broken wings
and hope has all but gone,
Love remains forevermore;
we never are alone.

Seek guidance through an earnest heart;
with faith, a heart can soar!
We never are alone;
Love remains forevermore.

~jodie

What would you say if your loved one wrote you this poem from far away?

7 weeks from today we will be in each other's arms, happy as can be.You are all I think about, you fulfill me. My love for you continues to grow with each passing day, more than any words could ever say. I miss your beautiful smile, the way you laugh, your tender sweet kisses.. I'm sad without my other half. I really wish you were here, I long to be with you every single day my dear. One day we will share all of this in bliss with a kiss. I look forward to our life together and all the joyful moments to come. You're the light at the end of the tunnel, and then some. Sorry if this is a little sappy, but I can't help it because you make me so happy. I love you..

Help! I need a poem (sestina)?

I need to write a sestina for my class, for those who don't know it's a 6 stanza containing 6 lines each following a specific end word pattern which is (ABCDEF),(FAEBDC),(CFDABE),(ECBFAD),(DEACFB),(BDFECA)..with the end words being future, older, man, ethics, work and success,... This would be amazing, I'm extremely busy studying for test and don't really have time for this.

Their last breath.

We all die, of course we do
is this late news for you?
Some of us die young, how sad
ending life stiff silent and clad
in white. The lucky ones, did I
mean to say that? They defy
the taboo word called death
and live on until they take it
their last breath,

It is one of my first attempts and I am only learning. Just picked up my pen yesterday feeling rather down and started writing away!

One day I shall hear that sound,
The echo of great deeds.
A box of innocent and radiant blue,
always changing, like the man

And I will stop when I hear that box
And pause to hear the creak.
Yet I will keep walking on,
For a world I have yet to see.

That's it! You could try guessing at its subject matter if you figure it out! Thanks in advance.

"I Sing the Body Electric" By Walt Whitman HELP ME!!?

In this poem he talks about the soul. My question is, does he believe the soul is part of the body? Or does he believe that the soul is an independent being, not at all related to the body? Please help, I have an essay on this due in a few days!! Also, if you have read this as well, in "I Sing the Body Electric" by Ray Bradbury, how is that a literary analysis of Whitmans poem? Thanks SO much!!