Update : And in order to create a bride
he caused the man to sleep in his crib
to take out the helix curve from his side
but way back then we translated rib
we couldn't understand Dna
and invisible germs and stuff
yet the health laws of old we don't obey
thank God for the enlighten ones
who will come around one day soon enough
Pssst--you know like where they pierced Christ
to take his bride out of the sleeping ones today

"Let it go, give in to sin."

She whispers in my ear.

"Let them win! Let them win!"

...

"Fight them, and respond to me!

Let your blood boil hot, and then grow cold.

Sacrifice your youth, your beauty,

trade it and grow old!"

...

But I don't want to fight, I say.

I want to just survive.

I want to see the kids still laughing.

I want to quell their cries.

...

"Kids you say! You are a kid! You fool, you knave, you prick.

Unseemly nasty worthless fool, coward and a fiend.

To not stand up to such injustice? How awful, full and mean!"

...

I lay on my bed awake, trying to dismiss it but taking it all in.

Is this the state of evil, this torment that I'm in?

Is this because of the sin of my parents or in another life?

That I might be borne blind?

These answers weigh heavy on the honest of heart.

The questions never end, when the answers begin to start.

Maybe this is too much. For anyone to read.

Breath in breathe out. It's lonely in a suffering world,

when no one wants your pain.

I myself am guilty. Please stop the rain.

Although presentation is the key, emotionality plays a large part in it. You have to be able to connect with your reader to help them feel what you feel.

In what style did T.S.Eliot write his poetry? Also, what events in his life influenced his style?

taxes, liberals ,dreams, a reoccurring nightmare that is always the same,but its like that movie you watch again after you grow some you see stuff that was always there but you didn't see it before because you didn't or weren't ready to understand its meaning........lets eat some chicken!
then we can have our ice cream!-----or maybe you know this one ----how can you have any pudding if you don't eat your meat! he's coming for you!