He came to me
Like you, but not you.
I thought it was you
How did he know it would comfort me
Being so much like you?

I don't know, I like the concept of your poem :)

Bone rhyming poem help! easy 10 points.?

Ok so i need desperate help on writing a bone poem that rhymes with the bones:
Femur, Humerus, Radius, Tarsals, Mandible, Ulna, Skull, Metatarsals, Carpals, Ribs, Spinal Column, Sacrum, Hyoid, Metacarpals, Scapula, Phalanges, Fibula, Sternum, Pelvis, Patella, tibia, and clavicle.
It must rhyme, and be anatomically correct and use all the words above.
Thank you soo much!

Does this poem I wrote follow the Imagist guidelines?

For my English class, we had to write poems based on Imagist guidelines. Does this follow it?
A breeze
A boom
A bombardment
Wet pavement and dogs abound
Yet I am safe
Inside a warm room
Listening
A boom
A breeze