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Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: Feel no sorrow, what do you think?” plus 2 more

Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: Feel no sorrow, what do you think?” plus 2 more


Question: Feel no sorrow, what do you think?

Posted: 24 Aug 2014 02:33 PM PDT

I thought at first glance: "wake" should be awake.
Then, I thought: it would be awesome if that had said:

* Mourns/Mourn/Mourning * my/etc. * "wake into early hours of tomorrow"

I think it's an awesome poem, considering my small indulgence.

Question: Feel free to critique so I might learn from it.?

Posted: 24 Aug 2014 02:06 PM PDT

~but time has won~ was a bit weird.

Pretty darn good poem though. I liked wondering if I was meant to wonder if the dawn, the heart, or the hope would be fulfilled.

Question: Why is this question not asked in Yahoo Poetry?

Posted: 24 Aug 2014 01:02 PM PDT

Kiss This Poem Goodbye

Kiss these words farewell
as I throw them on the fence
my troll escaped his cell
to rob my every presence.

What I shall write herein
will quickly be erased
because of his thin skin
my work must be effaced.

So it goes ever onward
Posts-Reports-Appeals
Till trolls turn to kind words
Or Yahell's freeze congeals.

These words will not grow wings
But removal prove their stings.

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