Can you give me constructive criticism on this poem?

Do you know where I go in deepest nights
Where I cry without tears, sing to myself
Singing the song of a lonely lil' boy
With books to comfort him, high on his shelf
And pillows nearby to speak words of joy
But this is fake, and sad, and he is ill
So he runs, runs to town where he goes and-
Meets a lovely girl with charming skills
But she turns him down, calls him creepy; snides
He cries, but-
At least I'm living life on humans' ride
At least I can love and pick myself up
And see such beauty and stare without slaps
One of these days these girls will say yes
Meanwhile I'll study and not collapse-
Collapse from stress, no, I'll suppress
And I'll work on that diploma and then address-
My lovely little maiden gal
Who I shall turn into my pal

HELP! I need a reverse poem on karate! With nine negative things that turn to positive when you read up! Im so stuck! HELPPPP please?

Shucks, wish I could, but there I would be doing your work.

I you re-question this and put a poem out that is your material,
then I will help edit the poem or give my thoughts. I am doing
you a favor,

and properly answering this question as well.

hey guys i really need help writing a poem!!! PLEASE HELP?

hey i need to write a poem for english classit has to be 4 stanzas long, with at least 4 lines in each stanza, it has to have a rhyme scheme (same rhyme scheme in each stanza) has to develop imagery, must have 1 simile, must have 1 example of repetition, must have 1 example of repetition, must have 1 example of alliteration, and must have a theme. I really hope someone can help me! as u can see this is a lot thats why i need major help im not creative at all! PLZ HELP

I don't know where to start there, but there is a book I once read,
and I think they made a movie out of it, called "The Ruins." You
could read that and get some ideas for your poem. Am sure it
will be more like an Epic.

(TBO IM ing me constantly while posting....insisting that I am the
reporter, that he has all the IP's and the evidence, that I have over
26 accounts-------when I said I have two. I don't know who the
reporter is TBO, but I do know who the one is you are referring to,
but you are so riddled with paranoia you have blinders on)

Now he's screaming at the top of his lungs on IM folks, that "thomas
did it"

Well, first of all, he's wrong, he is looking over his shoulder 24/7 poor guy
Second, bring it on if you have the evidence. In the mean time, continue
to sin and gossip as you normally do, and hurt others with your useless
babble.