Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: Por qué lo hicieron, me pregunto?” plus 4 more |
- Question: Por qué lo hicieron, me pregunto?
- Question: Where have all the poets gone?
- Question: Would you like to critique this poem?
- Question: POLL: Is this poem good for my class?
- Question: What should I name this poem?
| Question: Por qué lo hicieron, me pregunto? Posted: 26 Sep 2014 02:34 PM PDT Ayer hice tres preguntas en poesía y las tres fueron reportadas, me pregunto si es algo solamente de la sección de poesía o es de todo yajú. Muy malo está. Menos mal que puedo publicar y compartir en Google+ . ¿Qué es la magia del amor? Magia es que seas el primer sol que me despierta todas las mañanas cuando comienzo mi día pensado en tí, sin poder dejar de tenerte en mi mente ni por un segundo, hasta dormirme pensando en tí para soñar contigo en la noche. Magia son las maravillas que está haciendo tu amor en mí y en mi vida, llenándome con una vitalidad extraordinaria que nunca antes tuve. Magia es la inmensa y total felicidad que has traído a mi vida. Magia es lo que hizo posible que tu y yo nos pudiéramos encontrar en este universo. Magia es ese infinito amor que me das, sin entender por que me amas tanto. Magia son todas las maravillas que me suceden día a día, que no puedo explicar. Si la magia es el amor, y tú eres el amor, entonces... La magia eres tú !!! Tú eres el amor y mi magia de amor !!! (m.t.j.) |
| Question: Where have all the poets gone? Posted: 26 Sep 2014 02:16 PM PDT Its funny you should ask See I was thinking the same Perhaps their playing Some cheeky, devilish, chiding little game I checked in the cupboard Looked all under the stairs Im sure they will turn up soon On a day when noone cares As is this way of life When we seek so hard to find Never is it fruitful What a sorry bind Il leave you with a thought |
| Question: Would you like to critique this poem? Posted: 26 Sep 2014 12:53 PM PDT You have got a poignant, impressively powerful short story here. I think it needs a lot of work; I suspect there was no editing yet, but the concept is outstanding, and you provide good imagery to give a clarity of what this is. Unfortunately, many did and still do judge God and Jesus though What are you going to do with this? I hope to see the sequel, cough |
| Question: POLL: Is this poem good for my class? Posted: 26 Sep 2014 12:50 PM PDT We had to write a metaphor poem, and i was wondering if this is good or not? Love is the light at the end of a dark tunnel It's a rare finding |
| Question: What should I name this poem? Posted: 26 Sep 2014 12:46 PM PDT Would you rather read people's mind or change people's mind?No more unhappy love affairs, no conflicts, no jealousy, no curiosity. Just imagine again how your world would be like if you were able to read or control people's... |
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