Arts & Humanities: Poetry: “Question: What does this mean "I saw a dead bird flying through a broken sky"?” plus 2 more |
- Question: What does this mean "I saw a dead bird flying through a broken sky"?
- Question: Thoughts on my poem?:?
- Question: Can you critique my poem?
| Question: What does this mean "I saw a dead bird flying through a broken sky"? Posted: 03 Sep 2014 04:11 PM PDT I think it means, maybe, the symbolised end of the world. A dead bird would be the death of all living things, and a broken sky could mean a shattered planet. This is just a guess, so don't hold me to it. |
| Question: Thoughts on my poem?:? Posted: 03 Sep 2014 03:31 PM PDT Keep it. I like it. You've got a good imagination! :D I think the only thing I would say that in some places it feels more concerned with rhyming than with its weird story. |
| Question: Can you critique my poem? Posted: 03 Sep 2014 03:14 PM PDT your skin is velvet kneaded with the palms of angels. within you, i feel warmth. your body is a synagogue open for dwellers on christmas. if you were never right, and if i ever looked out to see you are always here. |
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